Review my website

[Megafast13]

Re: Review my website

First impression, I didn't like it. I didn't like the color.
Second impression. I don't want a kid to work on my car. (you look very young) Some people might not like a young person working on there car so, you really have to sell yourself as a pro.

Interesting that you say this since in anther thread you told me age doesn't matter lol. Thanks for the honest feed back

[akimel]

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Hi. Good start to your website. I commend your commitment and hard work.

I'd like to encourage you to re-write the FAQ page. FAQ means "frequently asked questions." Hence you need to formulate questions and then answer them. So what are the questions people are going to be asking?

Also, don't tell people they are stupid and don't know what they are doing. That may well be true, but you need to find other ways to say this. What you want to do here is to describe to your audience why the services you offer are better for people's cars than what they can get from the local car washes.

So give it another try. I'd be happy to proofread your text. I'm pretty good with punctuation.

[3Fitty]

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Well, you asked and since I'm not much for sugar coating, I'm going to offer you some advice...

I think it is amazing that you love to detail and that you want to promote your new business. I'm all about being an entrepreneur, however, I think your focus should be on learning the trade to the best of your ability and not marketing yourself.

If you've been around the net recently, you will have read about another young detailer who was more concerned with his message than the art of detailing (and it is an art - one to be learned). So, having said that, I think there are things on your website that *might* overstate the case.

Are you sure you can make me "have a show car finish"? As I understand it, you do not use a rotary, correct? Now, I don't say that as a criticism because I never intend on using one, but at the same time, if a vehicle were to come into you that needed wetsanding and correction thereafter, could you give that person a "show car finish"?

Even little things... if you've ever noticed when the guys at Meg's are teaching a class, they are often wearing aprons or soft clothing to avoid any possibility of damaging the paint. While your picture looks like a "photo-op", if I was to look at that picture I'd say "I'm not letting anyone with a pair of jeans near my car". Again... not trying to be critical, but constructive.

If I were you and I wanted to pursue a career in detailing, the thing I would put at the top of my list is getting into some practical experiences from classes, like what Meg's offers or some one on one training with a real pro, like Joe, Kevin Brown, Rasky, Nick Chapman, Mike x 3, Tim Lingor etc...

I mean, I don't even know if these guys have websites (and maybe they do), but what I do know is that they are all gifted detailers. What makes me want to use them is not shameless self promotion (non of them are self promoters) rather the quality of their work. Once you perfect your trade, the promotion you'll get from others will drive people to your website!

Oh... and correct the spelling mistakes!

[3Fitty]

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One other thing...

I'm not sure I understand all of the "our" business. You are not an "our", you are a "you". Don't be afraid to say "I" will come to your house and "I" will clean your car. Who is the "our"?

If you have employees, I want to know who they are before I let them work on my Enzo, get it?










For the record, I do not have an Enzo.

[Maserati Mario]

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Interesting that you say this since in anther thread you told me age doesn't matter lol. Thanks for the honest feed back

Your right age doesn't matter to me or maybe others.
But you need to think about EVERYBODY, all potential customer's so, you don't want anything that could prevent someone from using you.

I know I was a little harsh but I gave you my first impression. I've done allot of focus groups and this is the kind of feedback they want. I'm just one person, take it with a grain of salt, you'll get allot more of peoples opinions.

[Ryan L.]

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Second impression. I don't want a kid to work on my car. (you look very young).

Your right age doesn't matter to me or maybe others.

I don't get it? You don't want a kid working on your car yesterday but today age doesn't matter.

Ryan

[Maserati Mario]

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Sorry I'm so confusing. I'm speaking as myself when I say I don't mind.
When I say I don't want someone working on my car I was thinking of the masses.
I hope that clears it up.