My website

[Beejatron]

Alright, had a friend build me a website for my part time detailing biz. Tell me what ya'll think! BTW, still working on a few things here and there on the gallery and contact information.

http://www.ocaladetail.com/

[Fischer]

Re: My website

Not bad, the first thing I noticed was the text was a bit hard to read with the color and the car in the background. Me being 21 with almost perfect vision, I would suggest switching the layout because it kinda hurts my eyes at first.

And when it comes to pictures of past customers maybe doing a couple 50/50 shots to show the swirls removed and what not. That helps the future customer realized what is actually being done.

Other than that, it looks awesome!

[J. A. Michaels]

Re: My website

I have to agree that it is hard to read. Otherwise I liked it.

[CieraSL]

Re: My website

Under Services, you have: Wheel Polishing: Includes the cleaning of polishing of non coated wheels.
Need to change that first part to something like "includes the cleaning and polishing of non-coated wheels".

Also, under the gallery, when I click on the pics for the Scion xB, it takes me to the pics for the GTO. Need to fix that.

And I will agree with it being rather hard to read. Other than that, looks pretty good!

[sincfiles]

Re: My website

I agree, it's a tough read.

Also, building a website that incorporates frames, will have a tough time being spidered by the search engine robots.

[Beejatron]

Re: My website

Gallery is still in the works...also adding a couple more vehicle's I've done that I did some good 50/50 shots. The supra is the only car I did with pictures that I was planning on using online, so it got some good before and after pics. I'll have him change the wording in the pricing. And I'll see about changing the background and/or color of the text.

thanks guys!