Feedback on my Website

[Andrew C.]

Ok guys so I just got my website going. Tell me what you think, honestly. I want it to be as marketable as possible.

https://www.ACautoSpa.weebly.com

I appreciate all feedback Thanks!

[gmc1500]

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The website looks good the only thing is with the color background you have its tough to read the text on the page. The videos are a cool addition!!!!

[Murr1525]

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Well, here are my thoughts:

- Yeah, the colors have to be changed, I cant read it. And all dark doesnt seem too friendly.

- I could do without the music.

- Not sure if the fonts in your Services page work. I know you were trying to build up to the big package, but the small one is really small.

[Andrew C.]

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I was thinking people would run into that problem, I changed the font color because I wanted to keep the background

Murr I was just editing the page and i think some of the fonts were messed up when you were looking

[Murr1525]

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The lighter text is definately better, just have to check it through the entire site.

[PeaceKeepr]

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see if you can get rid of the .weebly. part...it makes your domain name too long and too hard to remember

[Andrew C.]

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see if you can get rid of the .weebly. part...it makes your domain name too long and too hard to remember

I could but I would have to drop some money and I'm already a bit short on funds from ordering more detailing supplies. I really just don't want to drop the money for a part-time job.

[kellyinkc]

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I'd lose the music, just my opinion.
A typo here:

"Exterior Detail

The Exterior Detail includes the 100% Hand Wash plus much more care than what your paint typically receives. Exterior clay bare treatment (removes oxidation),swirl marks and light scratches removed, paint polish applied to make paint sparkle, high grade synthetic wax applied for long lasting paint protection, wheels cleaned inside and out, wheel wells cleaned and dressed to boost exterior appearance, exterior plastic and trim dressed for a show car shine!"

Its bar. Plus claying does not remove oxidation just bonded contaminants.
Polishing removes the imperfections and oxidation.

You will remove the wheels to clean them? HTH. I am trying to read it like a potential customer would.

Kelly

[sleepy]

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I don't know if you have changed the background color any, but I had to do a double take to see the disclaimer. The background and the black colored wording in the disclaimer was hard to read. Your prices would get you work around where I live real fast and you outlined the different processes very well. I did have a problem with what you mean by S, M, L? I assume the size of the vehicle, correct? The van was pretty cool. I'm definitely old school. Over all I liked the website, and I wish you the best of luck at you website and your business!

[I Shine]

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Whenever I go to a site and it immediately starts playing music I exit that site as soon as possible.

[CieraSL]

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Under Our Services, Wash and Superior Wax, you have "long lasting professional grad carnauba or synthetic wax"; change the grad to grade. Under Exterior Detail, you have "clay bare treatment". Change the bare to bar. Under Mini Detail, you have "The Mini-Detail is a great all around package to get your car back to looking great again." I would change that last part to "to get your car back to looking its best." The only reason I say that is because some people might be put off by the idea that their car does not look great, even if it's true. However, people are more apt to admit that their car may not look its best. Us MOL'ers know what you are talking about, but the average Joe doesn't. Under The Works, you have "This is the Supreme of all packages." I'd pull out Supreme and change it to something else to spice it up a bit and make it stick in people's minds, maybe something like, "This is the Godfather of all packages." If it sounds good, people want it. And under Other Services, try to have everything on one line - it looks too confusing with one word or price on the next line when it doesn't need to be. You also need to change the color of your disclaimers - black blends in too much and is too easy to miss. The vids are nice, although maybe a bit flashy. Sorry if I sound overly critical, I really don't mean to be. I just call it like I see it. Other than that, I think you did an excellent job! Good luck!

[CieraSL]

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Question: What's the name of the song that's playing on your home page? Who's the artist?

[Andrew C.]

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I'd lose the music, just my opinion.
A typo here:

"Exterior Detail

The Exterior Detail includes the 100% Hand Wash plus much more care than what your paint typically receives. Exterior clay bare treatment (removes oxidation),swirl marks and light scratches removed, paint polish applied to make paint sparkle, high grade synthetic wax applied for long lasting paint protection, wheels cleaned inside and out, wheel wells cleaned and dressed to boost exterior appearance, exterior plastic and trim dressed for a show car shine!"

Its bar. Plus claying does not remove oxidation just bonded contaminants.
Polishing removes the imperfections and oxidation.

You will remove the wheels to clean them? HTH. I am trying to read it like a potential customer would.

Kelly

Thanks Kelly, I definitely need to go back through and check for typos and I will fix the clay bar misinformation. I will also clarify that I am not actually removing the wheels.

I don't know if you have changed the background color any, but I had to do a double take to see the disclaimer. The background and the black colored wording in the disclaimer was hard to read. Your prices would get you work around where I live real fast and you outlined the different processes very well. I did have a problem with what you mean by S, M, L? I assume the size of the vehicle, correct? The van was pretty cool. I'm definitely old school. Over all I liked the website, and I wish you the best of luck at you website and your business!

I actually missed changing the disclaimer which was in black because I myself did not see it when editing. Thanks for pointing that out. I still need to add the part about what size is my vehicle to clarify the S M L.

Whenever I go to a site and it immediately starts playing music I exit that site as soon as possible.

Seems like most have said that, I'll take out the music.

Under Our Services, Wash and Superior Wax, you have "long lasting professional grad carnauba or synthetic wax"; change the grad to grade. Under Exterior Detail, you have "clay bare treatment". Change the bare to bar. Under Mini Detail, you have "The Mini-Detail is a great all around package to get your car back to looking great again." I would change that last part to "to get your car back to looking its best." The only reason I say that is because some people might be put off by the idea that their car does not look great, even if it's true. However, people are more apt to admit that their car may not look its best. Us MOL'ers know what you are talking about, but the average Joe doesn't. Under The Works, you have "This is the Supreme of all packages." I'd pull out Supreme and change it to something else to spice it up a bit and make it stick in people's minds, maybe something like, "This is the Godfather of all packages." If it sounds good, people want it. And under Other Services, try to have everything on one line - it looks too confusing with one word or price on the next line when it doesn't need to be. You also need to change the color of your disclaimers - black blends in too much and is too easy to miss. The vids are nice, although maybe a bit flashy. Sorry if I sound overly critical, I really don't mean to be. I just call it like I see it. Other than that, I think you did an excellent job! Good luck!

I'll fix those typos and reword some of that. Thanks for the input its not overly critical, it is helpful. I'll also fix the other services problem with the multiple lines, but last I checked, I thought it was all on one line. Perhaps it may have to do with the viewers screen resolution?

Question: What's the name of the song that's playing on your home page? Who's the artist?

It is the Kill Bill Teaser by Hotei Tomoyasu

[Golden]

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Just looked at the Interior Detail services, as well as Mini Detail. You mentioned "counsel" but it's "console". Good luck! Site looks nice.

[Andrew C.]

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Just looked at the Interior Detail services, as well as Mini Detail. You mentioned "counsel" but it's "console". Good luck! Site looks nice.

Fixed!