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  • #1

    Your opinion please before this goes to print...

    Here is my first postcard to mail out to 5000 affluent persons in my area.

    What do you think?

    I see polish is spelled incorrectly.

    Would this post card ''grab you" if you recieved it in the mail?

    Thanks

    Freedom prospers when Christianity is vibrant and the rule of law under God is acknowledged
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  • #2
    Looks great, Joe! Get those things out there, and good luck.
    Nate Williams
    N.E.W.car Mobile Detailing

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    • #3
      My only thought is I dont know if I would say "trust to just the average "detailer"". Might sound like you are putting someone down, esp with the quotes.

      Might be better to say "trust it to just anyone". or at least "any detailer" with no quotes.

      Other than that, it is quite nice. On glossy paper I hope.
      2017 Subaru WRX Premium - WR Blue

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      • #4
        It looks awesome. I wasn't sure about the "I will love her" at first, but I like it.

        Can you fit a logo on the front? Just thinking it might stop someone from just chucking it without looking further.

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        • #5
          Joe,
          That is definitely the best one out of all the ones you've showed us. Nice and clean and very Professional looking.
          Tony

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          • #6
            It's good.

            The only thing I can suggest is setting up a photo shoot with a car where you won't have any objects in the reflection. That's what the pros do.
            -Dennis/FromThisSoil

            If anyone is in need of a company logo or flier design, don't hesitate to ask for help.
            I can accommodate any budget.
            To see a few samples of my work just PM me.

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            • #7
              In the first paragraph, you say: "Your.... you. You..." then end with "most of *us* will ever make."
              It seems to switch the focus away from the reader (to me, at least).

              Maybe mention something about insured?

              Nice graphics!
              The grass is always greener on the septic field.

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              • #8
                Looks classy and very professional.

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by Murr1525
                  My only thought is I dont know if I would say "trust to just the average "detailer"". Might sound like you are putting someone down, esp with the quotes.

                  I am putting the average detailer down-LOL ! Yes, it will be high gloss paper.
                  Freedom prospers when Christianity is vibrant and the rule of law under God is acknowledged

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                  • #10
                    Thank you everybody for your input.
                    Freedom prospers when Christianity is vibrant and the rule of law under God is acknowledged

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                    • #11
                      is this a 4x6 postcard? it doesnt look like u have enuf clear space for a barcode.

                      are you working with a direct mail company? if u do it right u can save money on postage.

                      give me some more details maybe help out a little.

                      I'm in the direct mail biz

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